writing in english, maybe a helpful method

Hello every body 

I’m here to declare our big decision   

 We have decided to go abroad studying; one of our old big ambitions. And during these months we have been learning English and preparing for TOEFL exam that is going to hold 8 days later. We were so busy, more than you can imagine. Please pray for us, because we worked hard and we cannot bear anything except for success 

A horrible event shocked us a week before. I and soroush lost our kind uncle in a sudden accident. It was so painful to us. Both of us loved him so much 

My God, please care of our lovely parents 

Although in this way of writing, the communication between me and my virtual friends might be more difficult, I selected to write in English to improve my language skills. But whenever I felt that I cannot relate my emotions, I will change my policy